Wednesday, 20 November 2013

Describing Dystopian Picture

 A row of red lights descending in the distance. Cars lined up like an army of red ants in battle formation. Murky smoke rising from the many factories on the hill.
I clenched my wheel in anger, "Get out of the way!" All that was in my head was frustration. The seat beneath me started to reach great temperatures.

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  1. Anonymous20 November 2013 at 12:18

    This is great I like how you added in similes and dialogue but still kept off doing a story. Your spg is good but you could have done your lay out better it was a bit hard to read.

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